Kisses are the stairway to the heaven of love
The more you kiss, more closer you will be
To the eternal paradise of garden called love
For kisses are the gifts of God to the true lovers,
Who loves much and engraves their name
In the cordial position of their respective hearts
And, when their two lips cluster, their heart melts
and gives radiance to their soul. For kisses
are as vital as the blood, that runs inside our vein,
And they are the wings of an angel, that soars in the
Open cherubic sky, remote from this land of strife
In the place, they call, "Heaven", where only
Love sings and love dances from dusk till dawn
And that place is none other than the lover's heart.
romantically creative piece on kisses and love. nice very nice. G
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 10, 2003
I couldn't agree with you more! Great write.
Reviewed by Sophia Barkat (Reader)
Reviewed on December 10, 2003
Hats off to Bhuwan, my fav. poet :-)
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on December 10, 2003
And, when their two lips cluster, their heart melts
and gives radiance to their soul
..Oh yes!! I can imagine this..I say IMAGINE..alas I haven't been kissed in years..yeah..I know..unreal..but it's true!!!..oh well perhaps next time 'round..:)
A big kissssssss to you from me for Christmas...X.... I love your poem!
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on December 10, 2003
Bhuwan that is one of my favorite pictures. Love it.. and oh this poem..how true..how lovely you put it..each line just warmed me...and here (((smooch))) one more gets you closer to heaven. great poetry.floria
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on December 10, 2003
This is so beautiful and intense in its wonderful message.
As usual, Master Bhuwan, you've written another lovely masterpiece of love. The picture reminds me of my father: who was a handsome Navy man. ~~Bonnie Q
Bhuwan! How blissfully you describe the Kiss, and rightfully so. It is the single most wonderful thing I can think of to show love and affection!Bravo!
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and gives radiance to their soul
..Oh yes!! I can imagine this..I say IMAGINE..alas I haven't been kissed in years..yeah..I know..unreal..but it's true!!!..oh well perhaps next time 'round..:)
Beautiful write..as always..
vesna :)
You lavish with such generosity, the love emmanating out of your big and loving heart.
much love and appreciation,
Tarek
Carmen
~ Sara
Kisses all day long okay!! Lol!!
Beautiful tender kissing poem!!
Love tinka
you have away with those words
sighhhhhh !!!
Many Blessings,
Libby
Thank you for sharing,
Michael
Allen
"In the place, they call, "Heaven", where only
Love sings and love dances from dusk till dawn"
(And congratulations on your publication!)
Hugs,
Tami
Enjoyed much!
as all your writes are
excellent
William