Could this be firefly me thinks...but what ever the imagery is great!!
Love this piece very much!!
Very vivid images!!
Love Tinka
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 25, 2004
Like Lady A I too am viewing this two ways, one by fire dancing, spreading and so forth, and the other way is a spark of "light" bringing light to darkness........
You have created a very interesting mixture of thoughts :-)
Ok.....hmmmm, I don't know if I am off here, but my mind sees this in two different perspectives.
First thing I thought of was, spark, like you're a careless smoker, and the window is open, blowing around your ashes lol.......
the second way I saw this was spark, as in thought projections, ideas taking form and flight, movement, all positive, not easy, but determined.....progression......
ok tell me how far off am I? lol
you have me thinking!
pax A
I usually don't post a review of a poem I am totally clueless of the meaning, but once in a while, I will inquire.......as I am now :)
This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.
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Love this piece very much!!
Very vivid images!!
Love Tinka
You have created a very interesting mixture of thoughts :-)
First thing I thought of was, spark, like you're a careless smoker, and the window is open, blowing around your ashes lol.......
the second way I saw this was spark, as in thought projections, ideas taking form and flight, movement, all positive, not easy, but determined.....progression......
ok tell me how far off am I? lol
you have me thinking!
pax A
I usually don't post a review of a poem I am totally clueless of the meaning, but once in a while, I will inquire.......as I am now :)