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Sonnet VII: Darkness
by Fr. Kurt Messick → (All Poetry by Fr. Kurt Messick)
  
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An original poem.


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darkness flows like ink from the eastern sky,

as if the dark waters from the sea floor

were bleeding into the day. as i lie

and watch a sliver moon hand low before

three medieval stars from india, the

last red disappears from the universe.

few stars dare to break the spell of night. a

legend predicts the breaking of the curse

on a night like this. but i would regret

that. there is a need for shadows without

sources, and skies without orange. the stars

would be lost in the sun's glory. i doubt

venus would appreciate it, and mars

would fade in the light, and we would forget.










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An excerpt from A Chorus of Voices
by Kurt Messick
Dry Bones Press, February 2003

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 Reviews of "Sonnet VII: Darkness"
Reviewed by S H (Reader)
Reviewed on February 14, 2004
I think this is well written.

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on October 25, 2003
Very mysterious, fills me with wonder! I especially like:
"darkness flows like ink from the eastern sky,
as if the dark waters from the sea floor
were bleeding into the day"
and
"there is a need for shadows without
sources, and skies without orange"

Your words paint such lovely pictures! Very nice!

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on October 24, 2003
Hi Fr.
Beautiful write....


Trixie :)

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on October 24, 2003
:)


Vesna

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 23, 2003
:0)...thanks for all your review!!

Profound write....strong powerful imagery!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 23, 2003
Sounds like an apocalyptic sky...;-)
Love the lines:
"as if the dark waters from the sea floor
were bleeding into the day."

Reviewed by Nancy D.
Reviewed on October 23, 2003
Strong imagery, well done.

Nancy

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on October 23, 2003
Fr., your sonnets provide satisfying food for the soul! ~Z~

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on October 23, 2003
Very nice sonnet FR...beautiful lines...floria

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on October 23, 2003
your work is always a delight

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 23, 2003
Symbolic, full of imagery and meaning.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 23, 2003
A very interesting, mind-provoking write. Enjoyed it very much.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 23, 2003
Profound thoughts and wonderful building of images.


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