Souls in Need (poem) by Ch'erie de Perrot on AuthorsDen

Souls in Need
by Ch'erie de Perrot → (All Poetry by Ch'erie de Perrot)
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Here's one for all those who have felt the sting of a lost love... Here's hope

Souls in Need We all need a love dew shake the fog when we're feeling blue When winter's gone left us all but barren Call on His name Sweet Rose of Sharon fairytales and fantasies don't cut n splice need divine intervention to waste the ice Souls in Need laboured love be freed taste that sweet honey dew let the light blaze on through just when you least expect it love will come like an A class ticket! Hanging tight to memories that ne'er heard our plight or pleas see them wholly said undone a new light shed has begun grasp His love with both you're hands comes nae as shifting sands Souls in Need laboured love be freed taste that sweet honey dew let the light blaze on through just when you least expect it love will come like an A class ticket! When love dies the world don't stop spinning though it hurts hold to one who's winning forget all the senseless lies He gives to one who trusts and tries tis all you can do when you're a babe blue we all need a love dew need need a love due Souls in Need laboured love be freed taste that sweet honey dew let the light blaze on through just when you least expect it love will come...Like and A class Ticket! Ch'erie de Perrott Copyright 2006 All rights reserved

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on August 28, 2006

Beautiful imagery

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones

Lovely poem indeed, Ch'erie. Always, when one door shuts, a window opens elsewhere. If we but learn to let go and trust that God has another, much better someone waiting.:)

Love, Lena

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on August 27, 2006

Very beautiful in content and welcoming for those of us who still yearn.
Susan

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

So true, that Souls in Need, need the Lord!
Keep on preaching the Truth!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Beautiful sentiments expressed with lyrical poise and sustained thought processes. Love all the alliteration with the long "ee"-sounds. "we all need a love dew need need a love due": the repetition of certain phrases creates resonance, too. Heartfelt longing here. Just lovely, Ch'erie. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)

Your words always are a healing balm..God bless you..

Love & Peace, Dove

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

You outdid yourself on this one!!

Thanks for sharing sis!!

God bless those who care!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Ch'erie, you write a beautiful poem of love, and oh how you touch the hearts that want it to be true!Bless you!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan

We all know that sting, Ch'erie...a test sometimes in memory to remind you you're alive! And if you're sweet enough, may sting again.
Love, Taylor

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Just got to go with the flow, if love works, great, if it doesn't its nobodies fault...hope you are remaining as cool as you can down under there...Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Ch'erie:

This is good and inspiring. Wonderful write!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Just gotta take controll of our lives. Gods the wind, we're the sailing boats, where we go depends on how we set sail and direct little ole boat...

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Ah Sweet Cherry Pie this is indeed an excellant write and one to be proud of, I would say we have all held tickets on that train sometimes first class but more often then not coach. I really like this one.

Fee

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

forget all the senseless lies
He gives to one who trusts and tries

We all need to trust and try and hope from time to time, Ch'erie.