I'm not sure.. (poem) by Ch'erie de Perrot on AuthorsDen

I'm not sure..
by Ch'erie de Perrot → (All Poetry by Ch'erie de Perrot)
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For a Pretty Awesome Guy!
I'm not sure! By Ch'erie I'm not sure if they're Teal or the softest Jade seems the mood reflects the shade Intensity doth come from within radiating forth the beauty in him Steals away hearts with one loving gaze leaves one reeling head in a haze BUT.. is this thief of the soul really looking to steal? or would he gladly envelope warmth he could feel... A Lover with depth A long lost friend would that set things to rights wanderings to an end? Behind those eye's lie passions untold I would wish to be privy as his longings unfold Inside of us all beats a heart made of flesh though we pretend that it's stone set in solid mesh There are no exceptions just amazing facade's We all hope that love is.. for us on the Cards! I'm not sure if they're Teal or the softest Jade One thing I do know From God they were made! Ch'erie de Perrott Copyright 2007 All Rights Reserved

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on June 9, 2008

... and the captivating sense of mystery, intrigue and the "need to know" is all part of this wondrous gift, Ch'erie. Delightful loving ambivalence here... with the desire to dig deeper! :)) Kate xx

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on May 26, 2008

A great write Ch'erie and I know an awesome guy that would appreciate such an awesome write. thank you fopr sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 22, 2008

this surely sounds like a gift from Creator! Beautiful poem Ch'erie!

ET

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on May 19, 2008

I am sure, this is a pretty nice one on your part...ed

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Ah, you are so right, always a gift from God, words of truth and wisdom with a bit of spirituality woven in....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

lovely write-so full of love

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

A wonderful write my friend, written from the heart...it can be felt within every line...well done!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Ahhh dear Cherry Pie this is truly beautiful and kind of warm soft feelings come from the heart with a desire to see these sensual coloured eyes of teal...or softest Jade.

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)

Aww girl, this is an awesome poem. (let's pass on the coffee for something stronger) Got kava? ;) hugs - T

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Chezza,

Beautifully imaged - and love the last line! God IS love. :) Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.