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I've More Than A While By Mark Mahoney & Lady A
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Creation is a drug I can't do without. Cecil B. De Mille


 


I've More Than A While...

Show me creation...show me your soul
Will you pen me some pages, outrageously bold?
Paint me a morning... a sunset at night
Stud it with stars, that shine pure and bright...

Share with me shadows, the ones you can't hide
Show me the shadow that walks by your side
Reach out your hand when you pass with a smile
There's no need to rush... I've  more than a while...

Tell  me an old joke straight from the past
And I'll laugh with delight and pretend it's a blast
What's up for tomorrow, tell me how was your day
You've got my attention, it won't drift away

Write of the mundane, the holy, the sane
Scribe till your hands can't keep up with your brain
Lead me beyond, what the written conveys
Show me the truth, that your lips dare not say


I don't want to write, for the sake of a write
Just to put down some words to appease
But I sometimes can't wait...to sometimes create
These feelings that bring their own ease
The shadows, the laughter, the jokes, that you tell
Can open the heavens...or kick me to hell

So let's plot our map that leads to that spot
Where legends are buried along with the lot
Don't speak of the hum drum...you'll drive me insane
But conjure the magic...your stories contain

Be my companion, my mentor, my sage
Write me an epic...Let's travel your page...
Take flight in the write, excite, and inspire
Bring it to life, with zeal and with fire

Sharing creation, can soothe and bring peace
I whisper your words.....and find....my release

 

By

Mark Mahoney & Lady A



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 Reviews of "I've More Than A While By Mark Mahoney & Lady A"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 21, 2004
Wonderful poetry you two!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on April 20, 2004
(((lady a and mark)))

stunning collaborative effort--well done! *BRAVO!*

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

perfection in verse, meter and rhyme!

Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)
Reviewed on April 20, 2004
Anita and Mark,
This is most impressive poetry, absolutely picturesque!

"Be my companion, my mentor, my sage
Write me an epic...Let's travel your page...
Take flight in the write, excite, and inspire
Bring it to life, with zeal and with fire

Sharing creation, can soothe and bring peace
I whisper your words.....and find....my release"

Beautiful collaboration, Excellently wrought!

Love, Sheila
Thank you Anita, for your lovely review ~

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on April 20, 2004
Well you two write wonderfully together! A delight to read and enjoy. Lisa

Reviewed on April 20, 2004
Bravo - a most satisfying prose of the highest order!

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on April 20, 2004
A brilliant collaboration between two of my favourite writers. Exceptional depth to this...well done both of you.
~Chrissie xx

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on April 20, 2004
Profound write!!!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 20, 2004
Awesome, indeed! Wonderful collaboration.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on April 20, 2004
Totally enjoyed this profound write!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 20, 2004
awesome poem! excellently crafted sentiment ...

Reviewed on April 20, 2004
enjoyed reading this, it a nice piece. cheers G

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1
Reviewed on April 19, 2004
Outstanding !!!
Very enjoyable!

Reviewed by Roxanne Smolen
Reviewed on April 19, 2004
So true. Thank you for sharing this.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 19, 2004
I'm so glad I didn't miss this one! Methinks we have
a duet made in heaven;-)A perfect collaboration!
Mark I'm so glad you took her out of the G----r hehehe!
Now you can get rid of that name LADY A...give it back
to Dana!hehehe!LOL xxx

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 19, 2004
A soulful duet by two very complimenting poets. Well done.

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on April 19, 2004
Wonderful write you two!!!! Loved reading this.

Jack

Reviewed by Rose L
Reviewed on April 19, 2004
Bravo! An inspirational write if ever there was!! Thanks so much for sharing it with us!

~Rose~

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on April 19, 2004
Fantastic work you two.....Loved to read this aloud....very well written......ty, Dani

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 19, 2004
"I don't want to write, for the sake of a write
Just to put down some words to appease
But I sometimes can't wait...to sometimes create
These feelings that bring their own ease"

And the ending..

"Sharing creation, can soothe and bring peace
I whisper your words.....and find....my release"

and the entire poem..Two of my favorite writers...
Mark and Anita..this is gorgeous writing...
clap clap clap clap....floria






Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 19, 2004
Stunning images, top knotch writing, well done you twos, encore..

Reviewed by Robert Montesino
Reviewed on April 19, 2004
Well Mark & Lady A youv'e both found your muse with this one! Great Job! Where do you get all your beautiful graphics?


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