Creation is a drug I can't do without. Cecil B. De Mille
I've More Than A While...
Show me creation...show me your soul Will you pen me some pages, outrageously bold? Paint me a morning... a sunset at night Stud it with stars, that shine pure and bright...
Share with me shadows, the ones you can't hide Show me the shadow that walks by your side Reach out your hand when you pass with a smile There's no need to rush... I've more than a while...
Tell me an old joke straight from the past And I'll laugh with delight and pretend it's a blast What's up for tomorrow, tell me how was your day You've got my attention, it won't drift away
Write of the mundane, the holy, the sane Scribe till your hands can't keep up with your brain Lead me beyond, what the written conveys Show me the truth, that your lips dare not say
I don't want to write, for the sake of a write Just to put down some words to appease But I sometimes can't wait...to sometimes create These feelings that bring their own ease The shadows, the laughter, the jokes, that you tell Can open the heavens...or kick me to hell
So let's plot our map that leads to that spot Where legends are buried along with the lot Don't speak of the hum drum...you'll drive me insane But conjure the magic...your stories contain
Be my companion, my mentor, my sage Write me an epic...Let's travel your page... Take flight in the write, excite, and inspire Bring it to life, with zeal and with fire
Sharing creation, can soothe and bring peace I whisper your words.....and find....my release
By
Mark Mahoney & Lady A
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Reviews of "I've More Than A While By Mark Mahoney & Lady A"
Anita and Mark,
This is most impressive poetry, absolutely picturesque!
"Be my companion, my mentor, my sage
Write me an epic...Let's travel your page...
Take flight in the write, excite, and inspire
Bring it to life, with zeal and with fire
Sharing creation, can soothe and bring peace
I whisper your words.....and find....my release"
Beautiful collaboration, Excellently wrought!
Love, Sheila
Thank you Anita, for your lovely review ~
I'm so glad I didn't miss this one! Methinks we have
a duet made in heaven;-)A perfect collaboration!
Mark I'm so glad you took her out of the G----r hehehe!
Now you can get rid of that name LADY A...give it back
to Dana!hehehe!LOL xxx
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 19, 2004
A soulful duet by two very complimenting poets. Well done.
Bravo! An inspirational write if ever there was!! Thanks so much for sharing it with us!
~Rose~
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on April 19, 2004
Fantastic work you two.....Loved to read this aloud....very well written......ty, Dani
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 19, 2004
"I don't want to write, for the sake of a write
Just to put down some words to appease
But I sometimes can't wait...to sometimes create
These feelings that bring their own ease"
And the ending..
"Sharing creation, can soothe and bring peace
I whisper your words.....and find....my release"
and the entire poem..Two of my favorite writers...
Mark and Anita..this is gorgeous writing...
clap clap clap clap....floria
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 19, 2004
Stunning images, top knotch writing, well done you twos, encore..
A people’s heart can be found in their poetic words. In history men and women have stood firmly upon their soapboxes and street corners, rallying the deepest beliefs of people to rise up and be heard. The poetrypages.com has offered that voice a new
Love Tinka
stunning collaborative effort--well done! *BRAVO!*
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
perfection in verse, meter and rhyme!
This is most impressive poetry, absolutely picturesque!
"Be my companion, my mentor, my sage
Write me an epic...Let's travel your page...
Take flight in the write, excite, and inspire
Bring it to life, with zeal and with fire
Sharing creation, can soothe and bring peace
I whisper your words.....and find....my release"
Beautiful collaboration, Excellently wrought!
Love, Sheila
Thank you Anita, for your lovely review ~
~Chrissie xx
Very enjoyable!
a duet made in heaven;-)A perfect collaboration!
Mark I'm so glad you took her out of the G----r hehehe!
Now you can get rid of that name LADY A...give it back
to Dana!hehehe!LOL xxx
Jack
~Rose~
Just to put down some words to appease
But I sometimes can't wait...to sometimes create
These feelings that bring their own ease"
And the ending..
"Sharing creation, can soothe and bring peace
I whisper your words.....and find....my release"
and the entire poem..Two of my favorite writers...
Mark and Anita..this is gorgeous writing...
clap clap clap clap....floria