INHALE THE THRUST (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*� Authors & Creations

Reviewed on May 17, 2005

**Gasp** (inhaling the thrust)
**Sighhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh** (exhaling the bliss)
Aaaaaaaaahhhhhhh... what a poemmmmmmmmmmmm...
Love&Light*
Alexandra*

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on May 16, 2005

very sensuous, good imagery and rhythm. For some reason I feel a dark influence here...not necessarily a bad thing...kinda like the sexy scary feeling of being in a place you should not be, with someone who is just a little bit bad.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 16, 2005

Lady A,

No matter the moniker, there's no disguising your engaging words! An excellent, ethereal beauty you've penned--thank you!

(((HUGS))), love and (always) continued prayers, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on May 16, 2005

Lady A_Moeba??? interesting (giggles). I like this Anita, it is sooo ethreal, and so poignant...thnx for sharing, your writing gets better each time I read a poem or story you have written. Thnx sis for sharing. May the Lord Jesus bless you and yours, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn to a fault, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on May 16, 2005

You don't waste a word Anita
and you still make it rhyme!

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 15, 2005

the thrust of lust is indeed a must ... great poetry!

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)

Reviewed on May 15, 2005

Hiya Anita...its nice to be back and nicer even to read yourself again,i have missed your work and know i have a lot of catching up to do, ahh sure thats the best bit of being away...the coming home bit... a crackingly good write that gathers pace with each line, very well done, take good care of you and yours, hope we can chat soon, be good my friend...Mark xx

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on May 15, 2005

Oh boy, was this one bouyant with lust! Well done.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 15, 2005

Lady A, this is conceptually spectacular !
Enjoyed every word!;-)

Love,
Alrisha

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on May 15, 2005

"Taste the wind's sigh" So beautiful
and kisses are always in the air and
hopefully landing where you want them.
Great write Lady A_Moeba

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe

Reviewed on May 15, 2005

I loved the way you build this to a climax (ooer, I mean a crescendo of course - but that's no better is it?)
Good one A.
love
Ian

Reviewed by Brian Pellerino

Reviewed on May 15, 2005

A,

Smashing! I LOVED this. Hats off, this one's a keeper.

B

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 15, 2005

Very, very well penned...thanks for this!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on May 15, 2005

This is captivating and exciting to read, Anita. Such beautiful lines and the flow is perfection. I just love the ones that rhyme, too.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 15, 2005

Damn, double-damn, this one screams at me. Very good. This one, "Plural our form" cemented my thoughts. Uh, did I miss something, Lady A_Moeba? Didn't you used to be someone else? Yep. I think I missed something.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on May 15, 2005

Enjoyed the build of this and especially loved the climax at the end. :-) ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on May 15, 2005

Beautiful as always Anita! I love your way with words. : )

Jack

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 15, 2005

A most passionate windy ride, Anita - and I love your new name!