Bubbled From The Depths of Being (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Anita...

I trust you....so you are in good company now...:)

Love

Peter

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Well done!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

You are not trusted because of that state you live in, dear Queen...but I shall protect thee till my dying day...I am yours to command...Ed

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

Sometimes bubbles surface from the depths of my bath tub...

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

This poem is beautiful, Anita, the flow is smooth and the rhyme perfection. It plays gentle on my soul like the music of a pan flute floating on a summer's breeze. Half Ogre??? Ah! I know better...so what kind of trick are you preparing to dump on poor ol' Ogre Ed??? I just know you gotta be cookin' up somethin' really sweet.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

I am a Capricorn. And I believe all cookies are guilty.

THEY MUST BE PUNISHED!!!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

Love the rhyme and the rhythm of this poem. Good write, Anita!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

nobody trusts me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sad sad sad

muuhhaaahaaaaaaaaaaaa

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

Love the poem as for the aside to the Oreo Ogre hahahahahahaha you are too funny!

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

Don't ignore your ogre heritage, good Queen. It's great that you're proud of your culture on 'both sides' of your being...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

Alas, I should have known. In every fairy tale I've ever read, when the extremely good ogre offers the extremely evil queen a gracious way out to a happy ending, the evil queen stabs him in the back - yet again.

You have just escalated this war - to an entire new level. En Garde, Evil One.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

Setting up something, eh?

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

You flow as fluid in the blooddtream and your pen cleanses just as a fresh breath of air does with birth.
Susan

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 9, 2006

Well this one is defianatly different but not so for somehow i feel an infinity with the words and the message. As for being an ogree I think we could probably start a club from Den members for that.

Fee