it will thin while it expands (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on August 22, 2006

Superb perspective Anita, profoundly moving.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on August 22, 2006

Very good write.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2006

Yeah what Dov say's...

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on August 21, 2006

Boy, young lady, you are getting heavy into some kind of philosophy I think...e & r

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 21, 2006

As calming as the falling tears this poem is so soothing to think about. The pictures that your verbal images conjure up though a little sad are so real.

Fee

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 21, 2006

Anita, you offer much to ponder in this sagacious poem! Your writing has taken on new dimensions! Well done!
Eileen

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on August 21, 2006

Beautiful wordplay that is a thinking poets creativity for sure. You are a master of words and a a heart overflowing.Your maturity with this pen is awesome.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on August 21, 2006

Dear Anita,

Your poetry flows so eloquently from your heart and spills into the sea of understanding. Love to feel your rhyme and rhythm.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan

Reviewed on August 21, 2006

You are on the otherside of the waterfall..and it is glorious...as is this special tear.
Taylor~

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on August 21, 2006

Powerfully eloquent and perceptive.

Anita ... I will reiterate, you seem to have gone through some kind of a portal. You are not the writer you were three months ago.

In poetic vision ...
Richard lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 21, 2006

Stunning write...so powerful and deep!!

Love it!!

Reviewed by atti? _ (Reader)

Reviewed on August 21, 2006

Was a very eloquent poem. However powerful the overall message, the content was layed over the readers eyes in such a weightless manner. The contrasting technique to contectual message was a nice touch, and I felt like it added a unique dimension to the piece. The rhyme scheme, however much I can't stand them, work out nicely for this. You did a great job of making content your main focus, apposed to bending over backwards to accomadate for an aspect of poem that is entirely irelovent. Overall as I said before, I enjoyed the read. From the image you selected to the content in itself it was a well written piece of work.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 21, 2006

You've gotten quite profound here, Queenie - and this is a marvelous piece.