As per the summary quote from Bradbury - I like what the Bible says along the same lines: "We are treasures in cracked clay vessels in need of a re-filling everyday."
The fifth strophe is as powerful a poetic statement as I've ever heard. Alice, you write in a wonderland filled with deliciously imaginative rivers.
Perfect. Everything is perfect, the flow, the rhythm, especially your thoughts and words within. Excellent poem, A Pax. I applaud you.
Much respect,
CJ
Thank God for your "addiction" since it gives us such wonderful poetry to read from you. Thank you for sharing your gifts, Anita. Love and peace to you,
Anita,
Your words couldn"t describe me or my feelings more...chills over came me just reading. How wonderful to have the addiction of words and this is jusT an exceptional write in y way of thinking...
Write on!
Taylor
Some addictions, their outcomes and their impact upon others if positive and inspiring are worth indulging. This is certainly represents one of them. The work of the pen is claimed to be mightier than the sword. True. Literary junkies jacked up with ink have made millions of people emotionally and spiritually high with their writings, changed the course of the world, even brought down empires. 'Gentle violence'? Fascinating oxymoron. A violence for our own good? 'Silence as armour'? Too often we have to make a noise to be heard, a noise with no solidity. The loudest most productive noises are often found in silence - we walk past too many good vibes at our peril.
Don't go into rehab Anita, keep the fountain flowing. We become addicted to your addiction
Great dedicated pen for the self and with this you isloated my own need for writing. Great pen this one is!!! Kind'a laced wih a magic potion for inner perception too.
love,
Susan
Your addiction and compulsion to words, gives us your readership. the immense pleasure and benefit, of enjoying and savoring your unique and talented form of expression and intention..
Contraband Marriage, traveling along the hemline of loving after incarceration, is a love story written in lyric and free form, set in reality with a different ever after.
The fifth strophe is as powerful a poetic statement as I've ever heard. Alice, you write in a wonderland filled with deliciously imaginative rivers.
I always enjoy dipping my cup into your waters.
A beautiful poem ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Wonderful write!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Much respect,
CJ
Your flow; your meter; your message - they all are perfectly and seamlessly imparted to the enthralled reader. -- Jeff
With Affection
Eileen
Regis
Love Tinka
Your words couldn"t describe me or my feelings more...chills over came me just reading. How wonderful to have the addiction of words and this is jusT an exceptional write in y way of thinking...
Write on!
Taylor
Beautiful work.
God Bless,
Lew
Where I dance my life
Dance On, and what a marvelous quote!
Don't go into rehab Anita, keep the fountain flowing. We become addicted to your addiction
You possess a very astute spirit of discernment, which empowers your work, with an incredible relevance!
Par Excellence.
Loev, Rhonda
Fee
love,
Susan
Your addiction and compulsion to words, gives us your readership. the immense pleasure and benefit, of enjoying and savoring your unique and talented form of expression and intention..
Write on master craftswoman...
Peter