NAKED INNOCENCE (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

This is beautiful, Anita. Soft, flowing, and graceful in thought and meaning. I enjoyed this very much -- your picture above is perfect for the poem!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 1, 2007

Very captivating!

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)

Reviewed on December 28, 2006

Beautiful, clever and very moving piece. From inception, would that spiritual growth kept pace with the physical ;) Panda :)

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on December 28, 2006

oh this is so good...lyrical, intriguing...superb imagery...outstanding rhythm.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on December 26, 2006

Five stars for this magnificent poem of birth and worth!

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 24, 2006

graceful, captivating poem, Pax ...

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on December 24, 2006

Brilliant prose! Love the picture as well.

Chrissy

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on December 24, 2006

Lovely and lyrical, very ethereal. Thank you, Anita. Merry Christmas! ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on December 24, 2006

"...Judge not another, judge not yourself
By innocence true , there lies your wealth" ~ These lines especially~ Your poem is one we all should ponder over...for a lifetime, no less!
A keeper...Amen to your thoughts!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on December 23, 2006

Truth...through the birth of spiritual awareness...

nice display of this thought...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Jacqueline Marshall (Reader)

Reviewed on December 23, 2006

A beautiful poetic image and so well written. I like your tight but flowing construction. JM

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on December 23, 2006

Stunningly beautiful and gloriously profound.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan

Reviewed on December 22, 2006

This is fabulous, Anita...innocence born...found again or reborn anew..."By innocence true , there lies your wealth..."
Christmas love and hugs,
Taylor

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 22, 2006

Great Xmas poem Anita!!

Merry Christmas to you and your family!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lew Duffey

Reviewed on December 22, 2006

And we all stand naked before the power of God. Naked and vulnerable and yet protected by his love. Welcome back. This is a beautiful write.
God Bless,
Lew

Reviewed by Approximately Naive

Reviewed on December 22, 2006

Ah, nakedness and innocense before the apple.
We come into the world naked, we go out naked, and in the beginning, we were meant to live naked. Trust Eve to go and spoil our innocense!
We try to cover up our hearts as well. Who amongst us wants to show this naked to the world?

Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)

Reviewed on December 22, 2006

A lovely Christmas poem Anita! I like the reconcilliation of opposites here. Outstanding! This is my favorite part:
"Come knowing naught, yet knowing all
Ascending before, the cry & the crawl
Ascending, descending gently to earth
Vessel of worth.....spiritual birth"
Merry Christmas!
~Butch

Reviewed by J.L. Day

Reviewed on December 22, 2006

Awe inspiring! NICE tug on the strings leading from creator to soul.

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on December 22, 2006

A superbly gentle sojourn through the sea of birthing Anita, I just love that pic. Sublimely inspired...

Paul;-)
hugs for Zoe.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 22, 2006

Quite captivating, Queenie - both the poem and the unique graphic.

Reviewed by C. Nichols

Reviewed on December 21, 2006

Great poem, I enjoyed this very much. Deep...

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on December 21, 2006

Great style and gracefulness in this poem. Victor

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on December 21, 2006

...and that precious seed comes to us, knowing more than we have answers for and understand more than will be remembered. It seems to me that we start out a lot wiser than we become, and then with age, we gain the wisdom of all we had forgotten. Life seems like a replay where we have a second opportunity not to make the same mistakes as the lifetime before. This is a beautiful poem, Anita, written with such grace and wonderful flow..and of course, you just gotta know that I love the rhyme!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on December 21, 2006

Beautiful write

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on December 21, 2006

glorious picture and poem, lady a; very well done! brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on December 21, 2006

This is fantastic, the poem and the graphic are both so filled with birth and life that they blend together almost in a perfect harmony of the senses.

Fee