OUT OF HER NIGHT (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)

Reviewed on December 25, 2007

Beautifully rendered imagery. I felt lulled into this world by your sonorous pen. Lovely work. -=ra=-

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on December 16, 2007

AWESOME written steps into her dream with your visuals and use of words!
Wonderful dark aboding creations!I like the journey through this poem!
Warm hugs and Warmer Blessings, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 14, 2007

Most excellent Offering!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on December 14, 2007

Definitely a dream-like quality here, enhanced by great word choices and a strong rhythm. Seems like a confrontation in the dark, where a realization about self is made. Excellent poem.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 14, 2007

This old caveman thinks that was quite a wondrous dream.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on December 13, 2007

You make sense from mystery and dreams. This is the earmark of a deep woman of thought...aGoddess of Light.
Only you could make this kind of sense froma dark abyss.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on December 13, 2007

I'm glad your friend told you about the dream, and even more, glad you wrote it.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on December 13, 2007

This is spectacular to say the least Anita and one of your very best...it has an almost ghostly quality as if you had captured the spirit of the dead and walked along with her until she faded into oblivia...

Fee

Reviewed by Lew Duffey

Reviewed on December 13, 2007

This is a wonderful composition of words building the dream and causing it to grow until daylight came to overshadow them.
Beautiful.
God Bless,
Lew

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 13, 2007

You weave such eloquence with your words, while keeping the mysterious ever before us. A hauntingly beautiful poem!

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on December 13, 2007

Exceptional image Anita! A romantic and adventuresome re-interpretation from a gifted visionary writer.
Blessings and Light ...
Bergman

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on December 13, 2007

Anita,

Your poem reminded me of a book I once read and gave a review for. Your word usage is always so exquisite my friend. Your pen is surely guided by a steady mind. Peace, Love and Blessings to You Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on December 13, 2007

That dream certainly had life in it, dear Anita, and you have captured it vividly here. Who can be afraid when you portray this unknown, deep, dark exploration of soul's night in such light and lyrical verses? Your way with words is breathtaking and always so polished. And the visual PERFECT for such a Romantic tale. Love this, Kate xx

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on December 12, 2007

This has ethereal beauty. It breathes of fantasy and surreal breathiness, and I like it a lot. The visuals are very strong, and the atmosphere is almost tangible. --Charlie

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on December 12, 2007

Thanks for this. I've just woken up from a weird dream, so I've logged on, and what do I get to read.. lol

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on December 12, 2007

It's interesting to see how poetry that describes dreams can gather very concrete elements and physical sensations (heaviness, lightness, different kinds of light, darkness, flying). I wrote a poem entitled "Bare" after a dream.

You created a mysterious atmosphere in this piece of poetry.

Axilea

Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner

Reviewed on December 12, 2007

Dreams actually are just a different level of being most of the time. Nice write, enjoyed reading.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on December 12, 2007

and it reads as a dream-nice job