Is there something you wish to tell me?
Clear the air, get it off of your chest?
Is there a rainbow you have to sell me?
Thru a cave where echos can rest?
I am not judge or jury
Merely witness to past events
I've only one side to the story
And nothing makes any sense....
Validation and gentle acceptance
Inspire my inquiries....
I do not require ......repentance
Just one moment of clarity
Seems like I think that phrase a dozen times a day. **S** Actually a very good write!!!
~Jackie~
Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2003
Let the truth be told, amen! Great piece!!!
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2003
Excellent poem......Have the peace you desire...
Have a great night!
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2003
I feel this way being approached by sales men and when telemarketers call my house....lol! This has a very "clear" message and cuts past the bull :) I enjoyed this:) Brilliant head work from you as always good Lady!
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
If you tend to believe romantic, passionate, masculine poetry is a thing of past eras, read "She Intrigues Me," and be swept away in the beautiful craft of a contemporary poet of love.
Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
love Tinka
Seems like I think that phrase a dozen times a day. **S** Actually a very good write!!!
~Jackie~
Have a great night!
Thank you,
Teresa Emilie
Amor
~Chrissie
the first step to repentance --
sometimes not.
giid write
john+