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All By The Cup She Gave
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A bit of fragrance always clings to the hand that gives roses.
~Chinese Proverb~



All By The Cup She Gave


A nomad wandered into town,
Weary from his trip
Cloaked in dust by foreign grounds
His sandals worn and ripped

Posture bent with chin cast down
No eyes did his gaze meet
Down silent streets no friends were found
Just echos of retreat

A sip of water for his thirst
To quench his burning need
Upon his soul, a bastard curse
That chocked him like the weed

Stranger in this land of dust
Verdant was his home
Bearings lost in sandy gusts
Eons did he roam

Shadowed figure by the well
Bucket filled to brim
Magic moment, desert spell
Her cup she gave to him

Drank his full and choked on breath
Until he could no more
Here by each sip, he cheated death
And left it by her door

In gratitude he took her hand
And placed in it five stones
Each gem the tale of different lands
That spoke in tongues their own

He stayed with her for many nights
As they slept under stars
He took her to his passioned heights
Her love his sweetest bars

He felt renewed, he was reborn
All by the love she gave
For her, he was, the light of dawn
To last beyond their graves

Lady A
12/01/03


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 Reviews of "All By The Cup She Gave"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 4, 2003
Interesting write Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 3, 2003
A most interesting tale, Anita! And a great rhyming poem, too.

Reviewed on December 3, 2003
(((lady a)))

stunning, beautiful write--well done, my friend *BRAVA*

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on December 3, 2003
Great story of love and compassion. Beautifully penned.

Carmen

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on December 3, 2003
lady a, your rhyme and meter was definitely on point, the story that you told one that resonated with me...a traveler, he was...scion of fate. beautiful tale, poet.

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on December 3, 2003
This is Fantastic!! You are a wonderful rhymer Lady A, and you have penned a wonderful story here! To quote a friend of mine, "I wish I wrote it"!!!!!!! lol

Jack

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 3, 2003
This a gem in romance and sharing of the heart. Great write!

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on December 3, 2003
Wonderful rhyming poem of a love fulfilled

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on December 3, 2003
You know something.....you are something else. I love your mind. Period. You leave me breathless, 'tis all I can say.

Beautiful BEAUTIFUL work.

Thank You,
Emilie

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on December 3, 2003
"He felt renewed, he was reborn
All by the love she gave
For her, he was, the light of dawn
To last beyond their graves '

Anita this is breathtakingly beautiful...great story...and I love the chinese proverb...floria



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