Sugar coated write, but so true, so true, sweet place is waiting for us to go. Freedom there, not pain, and fears gone away. Like a kite sailing in the wind this poem goes up to the highest level it can reach.
I love that first breath of poetry... especially "flippant wind". The whole of this poem is contest-worthy, Frank. It's got loads of great new word-combos, and depth and wisdom-- and yet it's a bit whimsical too. --Great poetry.
And on a personal note, it sounds like acceptance has found a home in you. I'm so glad to have run across this today, as it's been an "I want my mama" day.
--Trully a great write. You should submit it to a magazine. --Charlie
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That is the real beauty of it all!
Cryssa
Be always safe,
Karen
And on a personal note, it sounds like acceptance has found a home in you. I'm so glad to have run across this today, as it's been an "I want my mama" day.
--Trully a great write. You should submit it to a magazine. --Charlie