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On a Nectarine
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Well, Ladies, this lil piece got me into the National Authors Registry, 'bout 9-10 years ago. When the publisher asked me to change the title from "Woman" as it was just a tad erotic, I got the idea of the analogy, changed a few choice words, and Voila! they liked it. Hope you do also.

On a Nectarine 

Such succulence! Such firmness!

The curvatures of the orb accentuate the depths of her valleys.

The velvety smoothness of her skin, quite unlike the fuzziness of the peach, nearly bursts to expose her fleshy juices, the secret nectar of the gods!

Is there another prodigy of Mother Nature quite as promiscuous and sensuous?

Such pulpiness! Such profundity!

That first plunge into her sweetness causes one to savor her satiety, momentarily sending the senses reeling.

She is the seductive siren who wreaks havoc upon the taste buds and palate alike.

Yet, her captivating aroma promises: more, more, more! Whereupon the inept diner abruptly discovers her true soul within her moist depths.

Such rigidness-Such unyielding strength!

Her seed, as yet un-pierced, lies protected within her pit, surrounded by pithiness.

Alas, now that we have done with her, she will be cast aside --- used! 

But, after a time of dormancy, when the warm spring sun follows upon a

 

gentle rain, her budding seedling shall burst forth life anew --- Sometime... Somehow... Somewhere... ! Thomas K. Hyland, Jr. Copyright: May 31, 1993   FOOTNOTE: don't ask me why, but I attempted to use as many words I could that had the letter 'u' in them - I came up with 40.  

 


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 Reviews of "On a Nectarine"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 31, 2018
I like the analogy, very sensual, Tom. Love and peace.

Regis

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on December 30, 2016
well done

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on May 11, 2003
Whoa! What a write! Whew, this is powerful and delicious!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on May 11, 2003
No matter what the title, this is erotic perfection.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 10, 2003
Ditto.

Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on May 10, 2003
All ends are rebirths

Adam

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on May 10, 2003
MY MY MY..... HOTTER THAN sunburn! I need to go smoke now. LOL...

Teresa


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