John..this was just lovely..
"finding what you least expected
what you lost is here again..
all my love for you confessing
what you wished for on a star"
- very dreamy and evocative- Donna
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2004
John you write the most loving, love poetry, this is beautiful and meaningful.
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2004
"Now the dreams that you’ve been feeling
Waft into the light of day.
My own heart that you’ve been stealing
Here will show your own the way."
I think it's because you saw her soul..
while others saw only the shell...
great writing...floria
A beautiful poem John. Beauty is in the eyes of the beholders. It's only one who thinks pure can find purity in everything.
We all have no control over what others think of us, but we must all believe in ourselves of who we are; for through believing in ourselves can we be of certainties about our own goodness and our own futures. Life is what we make of it.
This made me speechless
and in total awe to the
beauty of this poem.
Gorgeous and rendering.
"Finding what you least expected,
What you lost is here again.
Let us be in love connected,
I am not like other men.
Those who looked but never saw you,
Beauty I can hardly bear,
But I look as all they ought to
With an angels loving care.
Let the truth of me bring blessing
For the one you really are,
All my love for you confessing
What you wished for on a star."
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Russell's battle-worn body looked defeated. He was a Union soldier; she was a Confederate nurse. But when Rosa looked into his eyes, she saw pure determination. He looked fo
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"finding what you least expected
what you lost is here again..
all my love for you confessing
what you wished for on a star"
- very dreamy and evocative- Donna
Waft into the light of day.
My own heart that you’ve been stealing
Here will show your own the way."
I think it's because you saw her soul..
while others saw only the shell...
great writing...floria
We all have no control over what others think of us, but we must all believe in ourselves of who we are; for through believing in ourselves can we be of certainties about our own goodness and our own futures. Life is what we make of it.
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
Love Tinka
This made me speechless
and in total awe to the
beauty of this poem.
Gorgeous and rendering.
"Finding what you least expected,
What you lost is here again.
Let us be in love connected,
I am not like other men.
Those who looked but never saw you,
Beauty I can hardly bear,
But I look as all they ought to
With an angels loving care.
Let the truth of me bring blessing
For the one you really are,
All my love for you confessing
What you wished for on a star."
You're an excellent Poet....
Lady Peg