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Sweat
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Sweat

It is us, these hearts racing
Primal naked need
Seeing it’s prey in the mirror.
We catch ourselves
Wet.
Love is this condensation
Now dripping from every pore
And just beneath it
The desert inhaling it.
Even conspicuous breath
Spreads humidity.
Baptize me-
As I baptize you
In Love’s name,
Soaked, saturated,
A sponge squeezed
For we are so filled.
Together we create
This new mixture
Only we can drink,
And having tasted love now
Our love-
We will sweat it out
To the perfect end.

John H. Bidwell

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 Reviews of "Sweat"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 16, 2005
such sweat is almost holy ...

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on May 15, 2005
What a great write this is. See? I told you, you could do free verse. ;) And, wow, I sure have missed reading you, my friend.

Hugs!
Tami

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 15, 2005
Sweat it but don't forget it! Succulent work!;-)



Lovely deluge of emotions...

Love,
Alrisha










Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2005
YAY!!! Way t' go John..'bout time I say...lol..
love it!
saved it!! TY..:)


Vesna*

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on May 15, 2005
Lovely work, drink up!

Best wishes

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 15, 2005
Sweat it out my friend!!

Enjoyed this one!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 15, 2005
Sweat is sweet when a lover's treat.

Ron

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on May 15, 2005
Well, the rapper Nelly's got nothing on you, John. ;-) (He has a hot CD entitled "Sweat" LOL) I really enjoyed this passionate write. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 15, 2005
Quite a poetic baptism, John - and very good.


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