A place exists where you’re the throne around which angels sing,
Where all of the inhabitants give lifeblood’s offering,
The grandest gardens spring with flowers only meant for you-
This magic place you won’t believe I wish to take you to.
Should any mortal own such grace another one would bow?
Forgive me, but I’ve seen your face- I gladly do it now.
My worship is the breath I breathe to reach you from afar,
If Gods are prone to jealousy I promise you they are.
For what competes with Heaven but the love that I am feeling?
And with my heart it’s Heaven’s secrets that I keep revealing.
The angels can not hush my voice for love is what they're for,
And I have stolen their own ways for you whom I adore.
This place is not a secret with its treasures hid inside,
My love for you has always been too much for me to hide,
And it will keep on growing till its depths have filled the sea-
And all the world will know the place God built for you is me.
John H. Bidwell
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Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2003
John this is gorgeous love poetry, what a romantic heart you have.
Outstanding write, John
You are truly a romantic
Hope she knows how lucky
she is..
XOXO
*Linda*
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on December 27, 2003
Do You Know Your Place?
A place exists where you’re the throne around which angels sing,
Where all of the inhabitants give lifeblood’s offering,
The grandest gardens spring with flowers only meant for you-
This magic place you won’t believe I wish to take you to.
Should any mortal own such grace another one would bow?
Forgive me, but I’ve seen your face- I gladly do it now.
My worship is the breath I breathe to reach you from afar,
If Gods are prone to jealousy I promise you they are.
For what competes with Heaven but the love that I am feeling?
And with my heart it’s Heaven’s secrets that I keep revealing.
The angels can not hush my voice for love is what they're for,
And I have stolen their own ways for you whom I adore.
This place is not a secret with its treasures hid inside,
My love for you has always been too much for me to hide,
And it will keep on growing till its depths have filled the sea-
And all the world will know the place God built for you is me.
EXQUISITE!!!!!!
Every word..every line...an exaltation...you have outdone yourself my friend!!!!
Erotic Interracial/ Reincarnation/ Suspense]
Gale Sinclair is a marriage counselor who has broken the cardinal rule of psychotherapy and fallen in love with his client, Zoelle Sutherland.
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You are truly a romantic
Hope she knows how lucky
she is..
XOXO
*Linda*
Do You Know Your Place?
A place exists where you’re the throne around which angels sing,
Where all of the inhabitants give lifeblood’s offering,
The grandest gardens spring with flowers only meant for you-
This magic place you won’t believe I wish to take you to.
Should any mortal own such grace another one would bow?
Forgive me, but I’ve seen your face- I gladly do it now.
My worship is the breath I breathe to reach you from afar,
If Gods are prone to jealousy I promise you they are.
For what competes with Heaven but the love that I am feeling?
And with my heart it’s Heaven’s secrets that I keep revealing.
The angels can not hush my voice for love is what they're for,
And I have stolen their own ways for you whom I adore.
This place is not a secret with its treasures hid inside,
My love for you has always been too much for me to hide,
And it will keep on growing till its depths have filled the sea-
And all the world will know the place God built for you is me.
EXQUISITE!!!!!!
Every word..every line...an exaltation...you have outdone yourself my friend!!!!
vesna...:)
ps..will be back on AD soon.
Amor
Peggy
Happy New Year ..may all your dreams come true!!
Love Yinka
(Where do you pull these never-ending words from?)
Wow, I envy you...
Tami