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Interesting
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Interesting.

“Well this is interesting.”
Why is it the sound of your voice is more beautiful
Than all the music I’ve ever heard in my life?
I know I’m on the edge of the biggest laugh
I’ve ever known.
I peek out from the covers and look at your eyes.
Those sly, wicked eyes that have shed more tears
Than anyone has a right to,
Until you started sharing them with me.
It wasn’t a competition,
But when you saw, and heard on the phone-
The tears that would come from me,
Just listening to you, feeling what you feel,
You saw me like I saw you,
Naked emotions.
Well now we’re naked again,
But this is a whole lot better.
You do look pretty awful, I bet I do too,
But if I had to go blind I would beg
For you in this moment to be
The last thing I ever see.
Heaven really isn’t far from Hell.
Maybe just a few days or weeks,
And we didn’t even have to book a room.
If we could have known there was
This much love in the world,
And it would all be ours-
We could have saved the tears
For our own goodbye,
But it isn’t going to happen.
This is very interesting,
You and me-
Happy.

John H. Bidwell

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 Reviews of "Interesting"
Reviewed by Donna Maris
Reviewed on April 8, 2004
I agree with Linda - they jump!
and flow- like a soft caress ;) Donna

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 6, 2004
Love is all! You say it well in these verses of yours. Love and peace, John. Regis

Reviewed by Alain Gracio
Reviewed on March 4, 2004
John I don't know what to say, I'm flabbergasted by your writing. I was impressed by your very detailed and eagle-eyed observations. I was struck by the voice and narration of your poem "I know I'm on the edge of the biggest laugh I've ever known" Brilliant! This is just one of many well written lines throughout this poem!
Excellent write
Cheers
Alain

Reviewed on March 4, 2004
This was so beautiful John! What a lovely poem to read this morning!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on March 2, 2004
This is the best you have ever written, John
I love the flow and the verses seem to jump
out at you. EXCELLENT!!!

Your friend,
*Linda* xoxo

Reviewed on March 2, 2004
Wonderful poem, excellent write.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 2, 2004
John this is spectacular....Love is like that...
when it is true....you only see beauty in your
partner...great writing...floria

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 2, 2004
Just wonderful John!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Brooke Willow (Reader)
Reviewed on March 1, 2004
Great flow. And isn't this what love is? "But if I had to go blind I would beg for you in this moment to be the last thing I ever see." Exquisite.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 1, 2004
powerfully emotive!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 1, 2004
Love it !

Elizabeth

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on March 1, 2004
I love your flowing style of poetry...the subtle twist with bit of humor, and then sudden rippling of pain...all in your work...They say emotion often breaks logical structure of poetry but your poetry establishes the same...

Debashish

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on March 1, 2004
"But if I had to go blind I would beg
For you in this moment to be
The last thing I ever see." <--- Wow.

I like this style from you, John. Your emotions just come pouring out. I love this! One of your very best.

Hugs!

Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader)
Reviewed on March 1, 2004
Lovely John,
......"On a clear day, you can see forever"....
May you never lose sight of it!


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