“Well this is interesting.”
Why is it the sound of your voice is more beautiful
Than all the music I’ve ever heard in my life?
I know I’m on the edge of the biggest laugh
I’ve ever known.
I peek out from the covers and look at your eyes.
Those sly, wicked eyes that have shed more tears
Than anyone has a right to,
Until you started sharing them with me.
It wasn’t a competition,
But when you saw, and heard on the phone-
The tears that would come from me,
Just listening to you, feeling what you feel,
You saw me like I saw you,
Naked emotions.
Well now we’re naked again,
But this is a whole lot better.
You do look pretty awful, I bet I do too,
But if I had to go blind I would beg
For you in this moment to be
The last thing I ever see.
Heaven really isn’t far from Hell.
Maybe just a few days or weeks,
And we didn’t even have to book a room.
If we could have known there was
This much love in the world,
And it would all be ours-
We could have saved the tears
For our own goodbye,
But it isn’t going to happen.
This is very interesting,
You and me-
Happy.
John I don't know what to say, I'm flabbergasted by your writing. I was impressed by your very detailed and eagle-eyed observations. I was struck by the voice and narration of your poem "I know I'm on the edge of the biggest laugh I've ever known" Brilliant! This is just one of many well written lines throughout this poem!
Excellent write
Cheers
Alain
I love your flowing style of poetry...the subtle twist with bit of humor, and then sudden rippling of pain...all in your work...They say emotion often breaks logical structure of poetry but your poetry establishes the same...
Enjoy twists and surprising turns in this erotic collection of sexy love stories based on seven classic fairy tales. There are romantic interludes to touch your heart and plenty of scorching sex to warm your coldest nights.
and flow- like a soft caress ;) Donna
Excellent write
Cheers
Alain
Reindeer
I love the flow and the verses seem to jump
out at you. EXCELLENT!!!
Your friend,
*Linda* xoxo
when it is true....you only see beauty in your
partner...great writing...floria
Love Tinka
Elizabeth
Debashish
For you in this moment to be
The last thing I ever see." <--- Wow.
I like this style from you, John. Your emotions just come pouring out. I love this! One of your very best.
Hugs!
......"On a clear day, you can see forever"....
May you never lose sight of it!