That damn vacant bed! And she's still in my head! I know about that stuff! Love the simple form of this. Good stuff!
Peace,
Dayvid
Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2010
LOL-I think you just wrote what a lot of us feel so often-well done
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2010
Everything has a beginning, middle and end. The universe, as I once heard, never says "no." It only has three answers: yes, not now, or I have something better in store for you. Hope this helps.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2010
Been there. Done that. From the guy's perspective however. It is a bad way to have to live when your passion is still there for your lover, but his is not for you. I remember feeling like if the world would just please come to an end I would like that. Good work.
This was very good. It had an outstanding rhyme too.
From previous writings by you I can tell you were hurt severly by him. A word of advice go to the nearest bar and nurse a drink until some guy buys you another and take it from there. Enjoy Orlando.:)
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Cheers,
Dan
Peace,
Dayvid
From previous writings by you I can tell you were hurt severly by him. A word of advice go to the nearest bar and nurse a drink until some guy buys you another and take it from there. Enjoy Orlando.:)
Ciao
Tony