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Train Ride...
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Gray clouds, foggy skies... city streets haggard and used. Dark tunnels with light at the end, graffetti painted walls seek approval. Solemn, unfriendly, cheerful, concerned faces... stare seeing and unseeing through hooded lids. Rusty rails, clickety, clack the train does pass... to and fro destinations known and unknown. Welcome and unwelcome thoughts ... probe the mind . While traveling stationary to our destinations. Written in 1986

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Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on June 12, 2003

1986. That was a pretty good year for me. I was in middle school, I was in love, and the music was great. As the years passed I imagine this poem has gained meaning for you. Believe me this goes into my reception of the piece. At the same time I see it as it was when it was new, freshly written, the ink still wet. Whether considered as fresh, new wine or as wine aged to perfection, it has a profound effect.

Adam

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 7, 2003

This was quite an excellent poem! I am liking your poetry here!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on April 7, 2003

I got the feeling that I was gently rocking back and forth as if on that train, while I was reading this poem! Good job!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on April 7, 2003

I love the way this tumbles down the page. Well done, Zenith.

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