Breathe in...Breathe out... (poem) by Zenith Elliott on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Barry Weeder (Reader)

Reviewed on August 23, 2003

Lovely and lyrical rhyme and flow. Nice.

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on August 23, 2003

~Z~
This is awesome work WOWSA, so uplifting in its words and breathing rythmic beat!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed on August 23, 2003

"Breathe in...Breathe out..." This is exactly what we are here for.

Live and create, create and live. That is what gives one concrete reason for what is known as happiness.

My Version of "make happiness your due..."

is >>create and Live < <

"Breathe in...Breathe out..." was dictated by a wise heart, and written with ink mixed with the aroma of wisdom.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on August 23, 2003

Uplifting write!!!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 23, 2003

uplifting respirations...

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on August 23, 2003

wise words.....love it.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

Excellent!!

TRASK

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

Very rhythmic and very philosophically astute, Zenith! A terrific write appealling to many different levels!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

A breath of fresh air...Wonderful meaningful write!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

So lovely Z...I liked these so much,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Rodney Bohen

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

Zenith,
Keep writing your heart young lady......
Rodney Evan Bohen

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

a great write..Floreann

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

Wonderfully written.

tony:)

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

(((zenith)))

good to see you posting again!

brreeeaaaattttthhhhheeeeeee s l o w l y

there...don't you feel the tensions just d r i f t i n g away? :)

enjoyed this excellent write! :)

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

Wonderful breath write!

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

I thought it was, "left foot in, left foot out" was what it's all about".... just kidding... Breathing is life.... excellent, Zenith...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

nice write, z; thanks for posting! :D (((HUGS)))