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Pride's Place
by Zenith Elliott → (All Poetry by Zenith Elliott)
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Into my heart an arrow flies
embedding poisoned
quills of pride.


Circulating, mixed with blood
numb with fear my
brain is stung.


My ego swells like tidal waves
struggling within
I can't behave.


Summoning all my inner strength
I battle with myself
til I'm wet with sweat.


My pride subsides taking it's place
behind the walls
of love and peace...


 


 


 


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 Reviews of "Pride's Place"
Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed on March 5, 2004
nicely written

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
Reviewed on February 27, 2004
hubris can led to big mistakes -- it's great that you have kept yours in a good place for yourself and others. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 27, 2004
Well written.... profound indeed!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by joni zipp-lumb (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2004
Very enlightening to read such a peaceful flow of emotions. Very thought provoking. Thanks for sharing. ~joni~

Reviewed by P. Michaels (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2004
Here's a battle we all need to fight. Pride takes us places that we don't want to go. This one is soul searching.

Patty

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 26, 2004
ver moving, insightful poem!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 26, 2004
Dynamic poetry...very stirring and profound!

(thanks Z~;-)

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 26, 2004
Pride is a kind of bad thing I admit, but one can be proud of their accomplishments as long as they don't "over Push" them on others, You have all the greatness that you should be proud of, love and peace is good, as well, but you need your pride too...it is what makes you, you! Peace thru the Write, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on February 26, 2004
Sheer Brilliance ~Z~ Much enjoyed.

Blessings
Ch'erie


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