Coffee Break (poem) by Franz L Kessler on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)

Reviewed on September 15, 2004

Imaginative and creative with a touch of humor. Excellently written.

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on September 12, 2004

If a cup of coffee brings you to writing such a great poem, what will a glass of alcohol do?
Liked this one.

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on September 11, 2004

Office reality can be interesting. Too bad the break had to end. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on August 31, 2004

Succinct writing, Franz. You capture the moment, the mood, perfectly.

Gina

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

A real slice of life, well penned.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 28, 2004

this poetic coffee break if just great!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 28, 2004

You capture the moment very effectively, Franz. Great job! Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on August 27, 2004

This was fabulous~`*

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on August 27, 2004

LOL . Andy!

Ver well done Franz.....you write with a steady hand! ty, Dani

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 26, 2004

I skip coffee on my coffe break and drink water........Okay so I do have some with lunch. Great write and capture of the office.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on August 26, 2004

I hate it if I return after weekend to find penicillin in my mug..

Most enjoyable Franz..

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on August 26, 2004

As clipped in delivery and potent in meaning as a Ray Chandler
detective novel.
This is a really 'snappy' piece, Franz. Enjoyed it much!

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on August 26, 2004

This is such a vivid insight into a piece of your working day. I really enjoyed it. Something that stands out for me is the way you bring sounds in. They are sharp and short - almost like your coffee break ;-)
Chanti

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 26, 2004

I like your coffee break Franz, more exciting than mine;-)
Excellent write!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 26, 2004

The end of an all too short coffee break is always a wonderful moment for an angry e-mail - especially if it's addressed to management!

Reviewed by Mary Quire

Reviewed on August 26, 2004

Nicely done. You have portrayed the coffee break perfectly.

M.Rose

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on August 26, 2004

"Coffee Break"... Unique creation of mystery, pun and sage poetic expressions, delivering a wise message through its esoteric lines.

Never rest Your pen, Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU