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Obi
by Lucille Bellucci → (All Poetry by Lucille Bellucci)
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Less is more

She sways ahead
on the moss-muted path,
brushed by minute flowertip scents
of honeysuckle, spiraea, clematis.
She is modestly gowned,
revealing only her neck.
Naked above plunging hyacinth silk
the pliant nape rises to hair
whose blackness blends with the night
as we step up to the porch.

She slips off her zorii,
pairing them netly to one side
and I, I must bend to pull off my shoes
clumsy with Western motion that is
all angle and implied buises.
She smiles welcome, slides back
a translucent door, draws me inside.
As I pass, her fragrance wafts to me
and alone adorns the plain corridor
leading to another sliding door.

Her gesture invites me to sit
and I do, on a cushion she has provided.
In tiny blue-vined cups she serves tea.
There is not enough for one deep sip
but I understand. It is ceremony,
and we hold our cups in fingertips
and our passion in other bowls.

Politely, she offers more tea
and politely, I decline.
Nodding, she stands and,
in lovely, fluent rhythms I am to remember when all other memory eludes me
in broken-down age, begins to unwind
from around her waist the long,
silken obi.

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 Reviews of "Obi"
Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on November 5, 2008
A beautiful message here and tells me lots about where yu live and how you survive too on tea and love and friendships.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 26, 2008
A story of crispness, newness a mere observation, yet a chance to learn and reach out....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on February 26, 2008
Very nice poem, Lucille; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on February 26, 2008
Beautifully written...
Cryssa

Reviewed on February 26, 2008
Lucille,

Absolutely stunning, the unveiling of beauty cloaked under silken kimono and obi - but not too much, leaving a hint of mystery - of wanting to see more - well done. Domo arigato, Lucille-san.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

My daddy was stationed in Japan for three years, one of my favorite gifts from him is a book about Japanese culture. :)


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