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The Guest Not Invited
by Jackie S Brooks → (All Poetry by Jackie S Brooks)
  
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One more Baptism interview, with unmarried parents, who are not churchgoers. Grandma asks "What denomination are you" and "Must we stay for the whole service."
Why do they bother?
A sad reflection on todays society!

The Guest not Invited


Your Baptism Day,
In the parish church
Mother and father
Grandparents and god-parents
Friends and cousins,
All are there,
The Vicar
And his congregation
All have come to welcome you
Into the family of God.
Photographs and camcorders,
A candle and a card
An old established tradition
It has to be done
Just as grandmother
And parents
Were done.
But, there is one guest missing,
Where is God?
Why didn’t He come?
No one thought to invite Him!


Today is your wedding day!
Handsome groom
Beautiful bride
White lace dress
Flowers all over the place
Everyone is looking their best.
Best man is nervous
Where is the ring?
Service seems so awfully long.
Taking vows before God
Repeat after me
Parrot fashion!
No hymns
Just pop songs
Photographs and camcorders
Confetti
Reception speeches
Where is God?
Didn’t invite Him!
What does He have to do with me?


Lying in state
In plush lined casket
Central aisle
Front of church
Would you know this place
If you could see it?
Loved ones weeping
Friends and relatives restless
Feeling uncomfortable
In this alien place.
Funereal faces
Black clothing
Especially bought.
No one is singing
Don’t know the hymns
Vicar is choking
State law says he must do this
You are a stranger
Though you lived in his parish
But he knows
God is not here
He was never invited
Into your heart!


 


Jackie S Brooks ©
12 August 2003


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 Reviews of "The Guest Not Invited"
Reviewed on August 13, 2003
This was excellent..Loved what you have written here!

Reindeer

Reviewed on August 13, 2003
outstanding write! :) (((HUGS)))

Reviewed on August 13, 2003
An excellent write and point of view.

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2003
This is truly outstanding!
~Jackie~

Reviewed on August 13, 2003
OOohhhh....Jackie, this one stings with thought provocation! Brilliant masterpiece of truth!

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on August 13, 2003
Wonderful Jackie.
A precious reminder of what's important.
John

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 13, 2003
Outstanding write of great depth!!!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2003
You don't have to believe to be believed in.

Love the way you made your points. Great write.

Reviewed on August 13, 2003
On this thirteenth day of August, I Salute You, Author Poet Jacqueline S. Brooks.

"The Guest Not Invited" has etched the door of my mind the message for the day. It is a striking refletion... It is the bell of REASON.

I thank You for posting "The Guest Not Invited".

HEALTHY HAPPY DAY!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU




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