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Love Looking Back at You
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Love Looking Back at You



Why do you run away
When you see me looking back at you
And try to deny my existence is true ?
My love is the reality you see today.
~o~
So you have been hurt,
Let down many times, even betrayed
By the friends you thought you had made,
And now maybe you treat others like dirt.

You have built a wall
Around yourself, an impregnable barricade
To protect your heart, your smile a façade
Hiding the fear that again you may fall.

Afraid of vulnerability
Holding all and sundry at arms length,
Sad and lonely, thinking it strength
To go it alone, protecting your fragility.

You only hurt yourself,
Allowing the poison of bitterness
And cynicism to chase away tenderness
That could be yours, come down off your shelf.

There was a man forsaken,
Let down, betrayed, scourged and spat upon,
Nailed to a cross until all life was gone,
But He forgave all, though His life was taken.

He reaches out to you
Through hearts overflowing with love
That He has poured out from Heaven above,
A precious gift He wants to give to you too.

Love He shares
Agapé love that shines like a light
In the darkness, don’t continue to fight,
Open your heart to the one who cares.
~o~
Don’t run away
When you see me looking back at you,
Don’t deny my existence is true
My love is the reality you see in a friends eyes today.



Jackie S Brooks ©
31 August 2003


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 Reviews of "Love Looking Back at You"
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2003
(((Jackie))) These are words I need to read often. Exceptionally well done!

~Jackie~

Reviewed on August 31, 2003
Very nicely-written Jacqueline!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on August 31, 2003
Fear and anger cripple souls. Doesn't leave much room for love and caring. Too much wallowing in this world. Excellent poem.

Reviewed on August 31, 2003
Breathtaking write, Jackie. Very reminiscent of my poem, "Reaching Out To Find You".

Julie :)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 31, 2003
A stunner! Wasn't expecting it. You managed to convey true compassion and heartfelt consultation. This is a very good poem.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 31, 2003
Outstanding write Jackie!!

I like this line
Don’t run away
When you see me looking back at you,
Don’t deny my existence is true
My love is the reality you see in a friends eyes today

To lose a friend or loved one...it's not nice...I know how much it can hurt

Love Tinka


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