Haiku Number 1 (poem) by Londis Carpenter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Eddie Thompson

Reviewed on March 21, 2004

yes, you hit the nail on the head...good haiku.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

Ah so much said in this excellent Haiku, deeply moving,

Reindeer

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

It's amazing, evokes such feelings in so few words.

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

"got it right"??? Oh, Lonny... if my reaction, my heart's response to this is any measure, this is SO 'right' I'm weeping..
I could see this, plain as day.. felt it all the way to my insides... the boat, the water... this has atmosphere, a visual for me.
How brief... but oh, how moving! Just beautiful! katy xox.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 13, 2004

terrific write, londis! enjoyed~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

I love haiku. I love this. It says and expresses so much. Thank you, Londis. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

Very well done Londis!!

Ps: Still reading "Justin"......lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

Good job.
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by Franz Kessler

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

Intriguing picture, great Haiku. Franz

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

I don't do these Londis..but I do
know that it is right...and it is
good..I love it...floria

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

Nice job!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

Wonderful Haiku...thanks for sharing

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

read "how to Haiku" by Bruce Ross.

nice try.

Reviewed by Rhonda Taylor

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

Thanks for visiting and commenting.
This makes me think of my granddaddy. His boat always sat wanting to drift in his last yrs but he was unable. A severe loss in my life, he died 2 yrs ago. His boat went to my uncle.
Still sits!
Thanks again, Rhonda

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

londis,

a good ku!
Your first line "Adrift at the dock"
Is brilliant it perfectly sets the scene.

well done!

john+

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

yep...you got it...this works...well done!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

Yes, very nice, Londis.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

(((londis)))

you got it right. :)

beautiful, poignant 'ku :(

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.