Powerful poem, with those wise and inspirational last 2 lines!
"And only what we do today
Creates tomorrow’s dreams."
Well done, Londis!
Reviewed by D May (Reader)
Reviewed on August 30, 2004
Lonny. you wrapped up this thought with so few words and hit the nail directly on the head. Well done.
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
Brevity becomes you, Lonny... you pack words with a hundred flights of fancy and always give me pause. It's lovely to indulge in then, but so exciting to wonder and discover what if and what will. I'm glad you got this out there. I shall close my evening with it. Lovely! katy xox.
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
Yes! By all means capture the thought while it is
in existence...for the thoughts of poets are as fleeting
as time.
I liked this one a lot, Londis!
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
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"And only what we do today
Creates tomorrow’s dreams."
Well done, Londis!
in existence...for the thoughts of poets are as fleeting
as time.
I liked this one a lot, Londis!
Glad you penned it for us to read!!
Love Tinka