A precocious young lad named Justin
To world leaders made a suggestion
If you ended all war
And took care of the poor
No doubt you'd win every election.
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Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on July 24, 2003
I seldom do this.. may even be a first for me, Lonny.. BUT.. I don't think I could say it better than Gwen has here. I like the way your mind works.. you've said it just right! katy.
Each person is but a grain of sand resting beside the sea. This thought sets the tone for Jill Eisnaugle’s latest poetry collection, Beside Still Waters.
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
~Nikki~
i concur--totally--outstanding little write
if all wars were ended, and all of the poor taken care of...what a wonderful world this would be
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
Keep the rgoughts comung, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Love
Tinka
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)