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Old Gold And The Mountain Man
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I suppose you could fit this to bluegrass, but I just wanted to write it as a poem.

Old Gold And The Mountain Man

The mountain was my mama.
The river was my dad.
A yellow dog I called Old Gold,
The only friend I had.
I grew up in the back woods
With no family and no kin.
And when I’m done with city living
I will move back home again.
I’ll climb back up the mountain,
Across the river swim,
And look around to find Old Gold
Down by the river bend.
I left him by the river.
We parted at the glen,
Where I told him I must leave that place
A new life to begin..
I traveled to the city
To find me a school mar’m
Who could teach me how to cipher,
To read and write and learn.
And when I found my school mar’m
And learned what I could learn,
What I learned about the city
Just made me want to return.
If I didn’t have my mountain,
If Old Gold I didn’t know,
I tell you, I’d be out of luck.
I’d have no place to go.
So I swam across the river
To the mountain I call home.
And I found Old Gold was dying
Which is why I wrote this poem.
The saddest moments happen
Nearest the journey’s end.
But you can die a rich man
If you have one faithful friend.
So before you start a journey
Please take one good look behind.
Consider what you’re leaving
Before you start your climb.



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 Reviews of "Old Gold And The Mountain Man"
Reviewed on August 1, 2003
(((londis)))

*applause* for the song you sing, and the message therein

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla.

i'm also coming home

Reviewed by Jackie Brooks
Reviewed on August 1, 2003
Fantastic poem/song, I love it. And take no notice of the twit who was too cowardly to leave a name. He/she is a 'troll' Jackie <> <

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 31, 2003
londis great!!
Nice to look back sometimes!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on July 31, 2003
Brilliant is right. Girl, you can write lyrics better than anyone. Bravo.

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on July 31, 2003
This is brillance!!!
Your are the MASTER of words.
I love this!!!!

~~Linda~~

Reviewed on July 31, 2003
Wonderful write Londis! I enjoyed this.

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on July 31, 2003
great write Londis
reah for my hand and pull me up,
I'm coming home too
An excellent piece

William

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on July 31, 2003
I am in a heap on the floor.. what did you expect? Lonny, you are a master storyteller.. you are indeed! I simply marvel at your ability to retain your rhyme schemes and your flawless rhythms and every single word belongs exactly where you place it.. no sense of 'fitting in'.. and you so gently lend a moral, never beating the reader over the head.. we don't ask for what you bring, yet it's just what we were looking for. You are a poet for the ages, you are... in every sense of that expression! Just wonderful! katy xox.

Reviewed on July 31, 2003
Londis, thank you for this....I'm climbing back.... great write...
In Spirit,
Bear


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