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Born In Arrears
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An empty page is looking back at me 


In pristine white and virgin purity.


I stare for moments, sometimes wait for hours,


 


To see its flaws spring forth like garden flowers.


 


Some thinness here, a tear, a spot or blemish,


 


Are starting points, which mar its unspoiled face.


 


And, following a fault, my eyes begin


 


Tracing the patterns hidden in the grain.


 


A shape emerges I could not invent


 


Which, like a muse, transfigures my intent.


 


A story the page tells will now unfold


 


In words I write for readers to behold.


 


Moments elapse as I wait for the rhyme.


 


(The meter and the tempo take more time).


 


A poem will emerge I’ll call my own


 


But no more mine than earth belongs to stone.


 


My mind edits the words my heart has spun.


 


Its purity is raped by mode and pun.


 


The final draft I haltingly surrender


 


With doubt that it retains the muses tender.


 


Though poems may be born of inspiration


 


They live and grow by men’s manipulation.


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 Reviews of "Born In Arrears"
Reviewed on October 11, 2003
This was excellent! I loved it, very intuitive!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Sara Russell
Reviewed on October 11, 2003
I enjoyed this very much, Londis. It sums up well that particular stage fright, felt by writers, when faced with a blank page, before the ideas begin to flow, which leads to the birth of a poem.

Sara.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on October 10, 2003
I agree with Katy. You do make me laugh, usually at myself.

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
Lonny.. those last 2 lines dropped me flat! Something always does when I read you.. the really goofy part is that my head was nearly exactly where this poem is when i was reading it.. Oops! are you reading my mind? Another talent of yours? (grin) You've got a million of 'em, no doubt about that! katy xox.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
Very well Written Londis!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on October 9, 2003
"Born In Arrears" - This is striking!



You, Poet, You are receiving many important visits lately! It seems that Erato was around and Phoebus is just about to stop by to give You an embrace for this magnificent composition.



Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
Reviewed on October 8, 2003
Extremely perceptive, I think.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 8, 2003
Great write and flow of thoughts.


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