Anxiety---unresolved anger
collecting in crevises---
day to day living
registering compromises---
shoot like roots
reaching into all
buried deep while they crawl
under there and everywhere---
pain screaming in decimals
strong like screeching train
barreling through the masses
causing cracks and and widening things---
smothered without a pillow
closing off the air I breath---
chocked by unfillment
hanging on just by chance
until the end transplanted---
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Reviews of "Mad Mad Undenied"
Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on June 6, 2015
It sounds like your anxiety subsided...I hope. The lines that makes one feel this anxiety: "pain screaming in decimals," and "strong like screeching train," "smothered without a pillow," Your poetry is very Good and I see you didn't rate this...you should!
Questions, unquestioned discoveries, and answers in parable and rhyme…. This collection records a journey starting with a 1960s retrospective and the first man on the moon, moving to a new millennium welcomed in with a terrorist spin, family crises,
Always,
Deborah