Soft and satiny smooth delicately scented perfume bright in color, sweet of taste young , firm and fresh ripened for picking tantalizing to the eye boundless in beauty abundant in nectar a pleasure to eat dangling just out of reach ...........A JUICY PEACH! ( what did you think it was??!)
Better not say what I thought. Might be to much info but I love poems like this that you can read and just let your mind run several different ways.
Nice for sure!
Tommy
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
Saucy and tantalizing composition...
Peter Paton
Nice for sure!
Tommy
:0)
Nice write
Robin
(and it just a little sneaky)
good write
john+
Reindeer