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Journeys of mine
by Denise Edwards → (All Poetry by Denise Edwards)
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If it wasn't for Authors, I would never go anywhere!

Today I packed my bags for Spain
I flew there in only ten minutes
I landed on a grassy mound near a village
looking down, I can see cattle and people
dressed in many bright colors

Tonight, I sit by a fire near the azure waters
and watch Senoritas dance and sing
the spicey smell of food cooked outside
and spirits of rum and wine abound,
and I become a senorita, and I dance
swirling my skirts about, kicking my bare feet
to the amorous gaze of a dark skinned boy
dancing towards me in startlingly white pants

The muscles of his bare chest move in rhythm
to the beat his hands as he claps them
just above his dark, curly head

He smiles and his hands slip around my waist,
I read the meaning in his dark eyes 
as the fluid movement of his slim hips
guide me in this steamy salsa dance

Without words, I follow his sensual steps
perfect in a dance I've never done before

Lost in the rhythm of the music and our bodies
and the mystery of night, we become one 
but only as long as the music and the dance lasts

The music dies slowly, and the rhythm of the night
comes to an end, we move away form each other,
bow in respect, and go our seperate ways.

Tomorrow, I plan a trip to the Isle of Barbados
all without leaving the warm comfort of my bedroom! 


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 Reviews of "Journeys of mine"
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on October 18, 2005
My absolute favorite way to travel. What a wonderful tour
guide you make, Denise!! I hope you plan to take us on more
trips. You have given me an idea. Maybe some of us ADers
should trade literary journeys. Sure we don't all read
the same books. When we do, we each take away something
different. Plus it is great to be reminded by a talented
writer about trips we have taken over the years. Gon' keep
a couple bags packed in case. T h a n k s!! 'Pea' <3

Reviewed on October 8, 2005
Beautiful write! Thank you for the journey! It is so exciting!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on October 7, 2005
Wonderful tribute to fellow authors, Denise. Delightful write! ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 5, 2005
Imagination! Beautiful, Denise. Great sharing. Thank you. Love and peace to you from me...

...Regis

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 4, 2005
excellent capture ... vivid imagery!

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on September 3, 2005
So very good. I enjoyed this
immensely. A gem!

Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2005

Denise,
I felt the great Rhythm in this.
Really well expressed , very entertaining too.
I will be reading more of what you write!
excellent!
peace',
Rich Criso Suarez

Reviewed on August 29, 2005
This was lovely! so beautifully descriptive and wonderful!

Reindeer

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 29, 2005
What a stunning poem Denise! You have shared a beautiful moment of your fascinating virtual vacation! What would we do without imagination!;-) Great write!

Joy and Peace,
Eileen


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