Wise words. We complain about our lives going wrong, but we don't realize it's our own doing. God doesn't want to hear our complaints but see our good deeds.
Thank you.
Very powerful write, Jerry! I'm sure this speaks to some who have had paved their own ways in life and are quick to identify themselves in your poem. It is never too late for those to learn this lesson in life and identify their own mistakes. You give the most powerful life's lesson!
Well said. I've always held, "we create our own reality" and thus no one is responsible for getting one out of a stuckedness but the one who created the situation that led to the stuckedness. Thus, little, if at all, victimization to wallow in. You've offered, in my judgement, another version of my own thinking. Kudos!
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
Cheers,
Dan
You're right. Why not live the good life now how you can. What's stopping any of us? Nothing really.
Ron
Try living your life so it fits."
That just about says it all, a great line in an otherwise intriguing poem.
Thank you.
Love ya!
Jane
Sandie