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God Said
by Jerry P. Bolton → (All Poetry by Jerry P. Bolton)
Thursday, September 12, 2019    Rated "G" by the Author.
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coming to terms with new life
is difficult
puts me in mind of the
real newcomers
Adam and Eve
and that blasted garden

God said don't eat

that's not your treat

cruel command
don't you think
huh
I mean gimme a break
with the rules fergoodnesssakes
get real

Adam and Eve

didn't perceive

look

here is the thing
God did his magic act
least it seems to me like magic
in seven day
made the old earth and all its inhabitants

He did create

all earth and space

majestic mountains

beautiful rippling streams
arid deserts
oasis' for the weary
forest for the oxygen we breathe
He pondered this and thought

no one to share

all of this air

well, that won't do

he musta thought
I'm God can't leave things undone
need someone to appreciate
all the beauty
animals are too dumb

so he made man

because he can

musta grinned a mischievous grin

when he ripped out
one of Adam's ribs
presto
Eve showed up
sharing paradise

He said don't eat

forbidden treat

think about it

two grown people
without a history of obeying
he told not to taste the forbidden
so what'd they do
they pigged out

oh, Eve went first
then both were cursed

 

©January 11, 2019 Jerry Pat Bolton

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "God Said"
Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on September 14, 2019
Like I try to live... everyone to their own opinions. Here, with a satirical bent, you satisfied both the believer and non-believer. How to ride that fine razor sharp edge and survive the multiple perceptions is what makes for listenable and readable comment. Food for thought without an inkling of the holier than though position many others might attempt. Liked this one, Jerry. A lot.

Reviewed by Mary Cochrane
Reviewed on September 14, 2019
I do side with Richard Cederberg. I totally believe without a doubt in the Almighty God. The Bible uses a lot of symbolism and metaphor and to be honest, it’s hard to just understand it. You need to dig deeper for most scriptures to unravel. Thanks for sharing Jerry.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 13, 2019
I read that story somewhere before. The mere fact that we can't seem to stay away from what is forbidden is what keeps everyone coming back to drink from that book of Genesis one more time like they can't help it. A real addiction. Can't see the hypocrisy in the creator creating the imperfection for amusement.

Ron

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on September 13, 2019
Satire at its best. Thank you for the sermon Rev. Jerry.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on September 12, 2019
That pretty much sums it up in traditional JB style. Love !it. I think I've got it sorted out: Both and all the rest of us cursed

Reviewed on September 12, 2019
This interpretation is so "the word of Jerry Bolton"! As you know my mother had a lot of the "old ways" about her yet my father was a staunch Evangelical. Mine is my own as well. See? (What was there before religion?)!!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 12, 2019
A bit satirical. Made me chuckle. Many people struggle with the Adam and Eve account. I never have. I understood it early on. Perhaps what people think of as fruit - an apple orange mango pear etc. - was not fruit at all. Maybe eating the forbidden fruit (that outrageously horrid thing they did that banished them from the garden, and brought a curse on the Earth) was them being coerced into having a sexual encounter with a fallen angel. Perhaps this heinous act was a harbinger to Genesis 6. r


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