I like this. It has a lot of minor problems with tenses, etc., but I like the idea. You need an "ed" here:
The consecrate knight of burnished bronze
on mighty steed off he rides
no longer searching for his maiden fair
and a "d" here:
He froths in tears of destined dismay
There are some awkward lines here, but they really don't detract from the poem that much. I think you have a talent for writing, but need to brush up on a few things. Good job over all.
Just as life during the pandemic was color-coded with different hues representing different levels of danger, life in its aftermath has become shaded in similar ways. As a self-styled “Seeker of Beauty with Beauty,” (borrowing from a quote by W.E.B.
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Enjoyed too.
The consecrate knight of burnished bronze
on mighty steed off he rides
no longer searching for his maiden fair
and a "d" here:
He froths in tears of destined dismay
There are some awkward lines here, but they really don't detract from the poem that much. I think you have a talent for writing, but need to brush up on a few things. Good job over all.
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