I stepped out this morning to smell the color bouquet of life green was a broken pine branch along with cut grass gold was a new born kitten after nursing mothers tit milk down the lane I happened on an orange rind, I picked it up there I also found the scent of brown from clinging earth
Looking to the sky which was gray I wonder what that would be then rain droplets fell upon me, telling of it's many savored shades and I knew gray was the scent of fresh fallen season rains white sheets flapping on a clothes line told me of achromatic scent Lighting crackled I sniffed air, I knew the color scent of inferno fire
I stepped out this morning to smell the color bouquet of life and I found that life's scents were a fragrant rainbow arch each scent layered upon the next all breathtakingly delectable when I stepped back into my soul I retained the balm memory each time I inhale these wanton incense again, here I will be
You have a great way to capture nature. I am very impressed with your work not just this poem. I think you will hit the heights sooner than later.
Best wishes
Miller
Uplifting and joyful write! Loved your descriptions.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 2, 2004
A fine way to express the scent of life. Especially, "white sheets flapping on a clothes line . . . achromatic scent," and "Lighting crackled . . . scent of inferno fire." Great!
The gifted and fascinating Urban Poet, Asa D Seeley, once again speaks. He introduces a New Genre of Poetry...Reality Confrontation. Juxtaposed with Essay and staying true to his unique style, Asa brings a breath of...fresh air...to the world of poet
The gifted and fascinating Urban Poet, Asa D Seeley, once again speaks. He introduces a New Genre of Poetry...Reality Confrontation. Juxtaposed with Essay and staying true to his unique style, Asa brings a breath of...fresh air...to the world of poet
Best wishes
Miller
Isharra
A charming poem - well-penned! Greatly enjoyed!
Robert
Best regards,
Leland
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