Tears welling up in my eyes,
Aches building in my heart,
I cannot carry on further,
The weight pulling at my feet,
I cannot go on longer,
The simple wait,
To be decided, By fate.
This makes me think of "hurry up and wait." Though I consistently work toward utter patience, still I find that I hate to wait. Your poem, Esra, truly reflects such impatience. Well done! ~~Bonnie Q
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2004
Often we come across such situations..BRILLIANT write!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2004
Waiting is the one thing I am the worst at. Great write. Hope your okay?
If you tend to believe romantic, passionate, masculine poetry is a thing of past eras, read "She Intrigues Me," and be swept away in the beautiful craft of a contemporary poet of love.
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