Short. Taking on the elements and giving the reader something to wonder about. (martyr) Making the rain and the image of the head bowed figure fighting the elements, until, at the end, you smile with the misdirection.
When two men hit the reset button and decide to go out looking for the good in the world, they not only find it but also a lot more.
P.S. The title is listed on Amazon under Look for Something Good by Robert Drews (not by Robert H. Drews)
Ron