I love the poem. I like these rambling kind of poems where the words seem to make a mockery of sensibilities and sanity. What does it mean? Whatever you need it to mean, Jane, whatever you "need" it to be.
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
budd
Deborah
and knowing one has a pretty good idea what it means.
Love and Light
Lily
Insightful write Jane
it's called a message