ISN'T GOD WONDERFUL, HE SAW IT ALL AND FROM INSIDE OUT...HE HEALED YOU, SILENTLY! INDEED, WHAT A TESTIMONY YOU HAVE, JANE! BY THE WAY, MY FRIEND...I LOVE THAT NEW BIO-PHOTO! THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSSNGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS
Not many can compare with Rumi. I like the quote you have added here with your poem. Very appropriate. Your poem itself is quite good, even if it does express some kind of sorrow. It's short, meaningful, and to the point and it captures something unique, which is exactly what a good poem is supposed to do. Excellent. John
This is,especially from you, such a sad and lonely write. You can drown in silence, as well as sorrow, but I promise the sun will shine on you tomorrow.
I am reminded of "I wasn't waving but drowning...."
This is very sad Jane....
Sometimes the reason why the motions are gone through presents itself unexpectedly in the sharing ...
It has to be the right person however....
Love,
Diana....
Oh my Jane. This is heartbreaking. At least there is one you seem to be able to go to for at least a measure of healing. Maybe not healing, but at lest an ear.
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This is very sad Jane....
Sometimes the reason why the motions are gone through presents itself unexpectedly in the sharing ...
It has to be the right person however....
Love,
Diana....