Always be the "free spirit" that is your self, Jane. I love the self-reflection shared through your verses. I also know that you would probably now have liked to have written "whose" in this verse: A candle who's light shines. My brother, who is a fine writer, always has trouble remembering to double check those contractions. Lol! Love and best wishes to you, Jane.
If you tend to believe romantic, passionate, masculine poetry is a thing of past eras, read "She Intrigues Me," and be swept away in the beautiful craft of a contemporary poet of love.
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by another...we all wish to be free in our own right!
You poetry is coming along nicely.
Always,
Deborah
Thank you for sharing,and continued success.
Barbara J. Henry
Lay down with me;
Tell me no lies.
Just hold me close;
Don't patronize.
I gotta be free
I am who I am
That's my decree.
Michael D.
Your poem expresses the exuberance you feel as though you can fly, now that your wings are no longer tied.
Ron
Love your words Jane,
Hugs,
Diana...
Regis