The style, rhyme flow, phrases and imagery that totally support the theme are artistically wonderful and enjoyed. Thanks for sharing, Jane. Love, blessings and faith...joyce * His Inspirations
Unfortunately, your romantic take on relationship start has been reduced in the 21st to "wanna hook up?" Sadly the age of intimate images, like your poem depicts, is an endangered principal. Good write.
Ron
The embers of lust burned hot.
Whispering sweet nothings,
Subtle sexiness hits the spot.