Pebble (poem) by Shawn Patrick Cormier on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 1, 2019

Susan said it all. Well done

Reviewed on November 22, 2016

I do believe that you're on to something here. Life has a way of kicking us around.

Kudos on a job well done. Keep on writing and keep on keeping om.

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on February 20, 2016

I understand.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2013

...am in sync with your train of thought..as are many others!
am saving this one ..thank you Shawn..

Blessings,

Vesna :)

Reviewed by Regis Schilken

Reviewed on February 16, 2012

Sounds like the feelings of emptiness all of us have. Nice wording!

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on March 7, 2011

Hi Shawn, So much more to that "peace" isn't there? Thank you for sharing this emotionally charged write.. =))

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Dawn Mullan

Reviewed on February 24, 2010

Know these feelings all to well. Great write. Thank you, DL Mullan

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on July 20, 2009

Yes Shawn, I have been there. Excellent write.

Anna

Reviewed by randy smith (Reader)

Reviewed on March 11, 2009

If you drop a pebble into a pond its ripples cross the pond. are not your words like pebbles, droped into the pond of humanity?rcs

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on April 30, 2008

Tossed back from the ocean, but the ocean is so peaceful a place to me. You are not lost among the sand, you are revived and going on from your losses very nicely.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on November 18, 2007

i like this

Reviewed by Doug Jones

Reviewed on May 13, 2007

truer words were never spoken

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on April 27, 2007

very poignant write-i feel like i am in the lost phase right now--anyway, a well done write

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on September 11, 2006

a powerful sense of loss of control over the events in your life ...

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on September 11, 2006

Yes we have. A very apt comparison.

Reviewed by Lady GoldStar (Reader)

Reviewed on September 11, 2006

I like it.... the words flow so well..~Lady GoldStar

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on September 7, 2006

Yes. You are right. You express a universal human theme here, Shawn. I can certainly relate. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on September 6, 2006

an excellent description of a feeling of helplessness...of being the recipient of whatever whim the fates might have

this is very, very good. it reads very well.

Susan