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The White Picket Fence
by Susanne Leist → (All Poetry by Susanne Leist)
Thursday, June 14, 2018    Rated "G" by the Author.
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THE WHITE PICKET FENCE

 

 

 

coiour-my-world:

Autumn Fence, Woodstock, Vermont

A walk down a country road,

not knowing what it may hold.

Leaves crunch loudly beneath my feet,

walking fast is no easy feat.

 

I need to get home to make dinner,

I’d hoped the walk would make me thinner.

But I need to slow down and breath the air,

as sweet as cotton candy at a fair.

 

My steps follow the white picket fence,

the other side makes me cold and tense.

The huge dog jumps high in the air,

his eyes white dots on his black hair.

 

He whimpers and walks closer to me,

his dark eyes as wide as can be.

He lifts a large paw to the gate,

as I slow down my frenzied gait.

 

I stop in place to pet his head,

I know I have just made my bed.

I will now be home late for dinner,

but the dog knows I’m still the winner.

 

I have stopped to smell the flowers,

I’m refreshed with superpowers.

I race home with new resolve,

no more time puzzles to solve.



Susanne Leist

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Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on June 19, 2018
A gem of bright and beautiful visuals brought to life from beginning to end.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 17, 2018
Photo, verses and theme expressed complement one another very effectively, Susanne. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on June 17, 2018
IT CERTAINLY IS AMAZING...BEING IN THE RIGHT PLACE, AT THE RIGHT TIME...WHAT A DIFFERENCE A BRISK WALK CAN MAKE, ESPECIALLY WHEN THERE'S A FRIENDLY, FOUR FOOTED ELEMENT INVOLVED. GREAT SHARING, THANKS, SUSANNE. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 15, 2018
What a gorgeous photo! All the women that I've known love white picket fences. And what a gorgeous poem to go with it! I really love where you turn something sinister into something wonderful. Befriending a lonely, penned in dog with a hand to his head. If only people would do that kind of wonderful thing, taking time from their rushing to and fro, the world would be a much better place. So, your poem story is an allegory for taking time out to stop and overcome our fears.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on June 15, 2018
THIS is one hell of a wright. For a dog lover, this beauty of a write touches me in the shadows of my heart. Thank you.

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on June 15, 2018
You stopped and smelled the flowers,
and gave a dog a pet.
But I bet your family's puzzled,
over why dinner's not ready yet.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on June 15, 2018
It's amazing how a simple encounter behind a "white picket fence" can change things. That is the mystery of life and the beauty of this poem.

Reviewed on June 14, 2018
I'm glad you stopped to make a friend. Lovely!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Mystic Rose
Reviewed on June 14, 2018
It is a gift to be able to stop and smell the flowers. No greater joy then to wander in God's sweet space, Lovely poem Susanne,
Thanks for sharing


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