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awful attempt at morbid
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Have you ever written anything that ...even YOU...think is garbage fodder....

morbid horrid poetic attempt..


betrayals guest comes to me a-haunting
lykewyse indiscretions mocking taunting
and me for revenges ever wanting
I slaver for the day

from a deed so callous in the awful past
lyke some withered harpy’s spell that cast
a curse upon my ever last-
ting memorie

i want not to wake from this lonely doom
leave me now in my darkness gloom
where my spirit wanders within the womb
of despair

graham..mar..2004




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 Reviews of "awful attempt at morbid"
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 31, 2004
Graham,

This one is solomon it is
dark and deep. Can feel the
dispair...

Ladye Peg.....


Reviewed by anne cunningham
Reviewed on March 31, 2004
don't delete. i agree with eileen, you hit the despondency nail right on the head, so change this to ... "successful morbid attempt!"

Reviewed on March 30, 2004
This is NOT as trashy as you think it is, graham...the writing and meter are impeccable, and i think you did a very good job with this!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on March 30, 2004
I have written many things I thought were trash. Only to look at them years later and realize they were quite interesting. As my frame of mind has changed, so has my perception of past works. You may think this poem is trash now. But look at it later and see if you can realize a particular flow you were not capable of before. Despite the despondent tone of this, it flows beautifully.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on March 30, 2004
I like morbid.....lol

Well I don't like it, I think It makes for some great poetry......I enjoyed this Graham.

ty, Dani

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on March 30, 2004
Yes, and usually ended up deleting it, but thats just me. As for this write, hmmmm, no, i dont believe you. Your not a morbid person, you must of just forgotten the happy pills for the day. :)
Not convinced hehe.
Ch'erie

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 29, 2004
I found it quite despondent, which is what
you intended, so I guess it's a successful
morbid write;-)

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2004
lol- I think this is an interesting attempt at morbid:)


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