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My Fathers' Son
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My Fathers’ Son


 

Well, the man steps out

Into the dark, cobbled street

And, there before him stood

A tiny boy with bare feet

“I can’t believe this sight

Nowadays it isn’t right.”

 

The boy smiles thru his pale skin

The man responds with a kindly grin

And takes his camera

To take a snapshot into the light

“I can’t believe this sight

Nowadays it isn’t right.”

 

It’s all gone quiet and red

The boy looks half dead

He hands the man a looking glass

Into which he peers

Mesmerised by what he sees

He’s then reduced to tears

The boy shouts

“Don’t leave me Dad, in the street

For I’ve nothing on my feet

My stomach aches for lack of food

And my head for sleepless nights

I can’t believe this sight

I’m running out of light

Don’t leave me here Dad

Are you frightened of what you see Dad?

Are you blind? Can’t you see?

I’m your son; it’s me

Please come back Dad.”

 

© Andrea Coltman

 

 


 

 


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 Reviews of "My Fathers' Son"
Reviewed on April 14, 2004
Sad and painfully true - a fine piece!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on April 13, 2004
sad but very powerful write!!!!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 11, 2004
Sad but well written piece Andrea!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 10, 2004
Sad truth. Moving and captivating write, Andrea. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Magnus Rater (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2004
AaaaaH - yes! The image rather than the subject. To have a snapshot rather than the painful reality. What a masterpiece, Andrea! Poignant and, alas, so close to home.

When will we see your contributions in a book?


Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2004
A sad reality written well...

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2004
Ouch, how painful is this.


Written that I can hear his plea.

Amazing piece of art, is this poem!!!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2004
painful and so precious Andrea....

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2004
Andrea this is so sad....sometimes even when
fathers still live at home...they aren't really
there...this is so poignant...lovely write...
Happy Easter to you...
Floria

Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on April 10, 2004
powerful in presentation ---

well done !!!

john+


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